Sunday, February 19, 2012

Slowing Down Time

sentence summary : Alisha was angry at herself for allowing her secret to be revealed. 


summary paragraph: Alisha ran out of her house the wind blowing in her hair, Simon yelled after her,but she payed him no mind to him. She knew she didn't deserve him, he was to good for her, she was a two timing hoe. She ran out into the oncoming traffic like a business woman,  she thought it was more important to check her phone rather than what was in front of her. The car came toward her in full speed but all she could think of was the face that Simon gave her when she spilled her secret. She thought maybe I deserve to die, he was to good for me, she was a whore. A single tear began to fall from her left eye as the realization sunk in that she cheated on him with her brother Nathan.

Slow motion/ Flashback: Alisha heard a loud honking before she felt a huge force on her hip. Her head whip-lashed and she was lifted up off the floor. Her hair danced with the wind as she slammed own into the hood of the car. Her arm dislocated under her. Her body began to shift in position. Simon stood by the door looking in fear, petrified. The body flew his way making an unnatural and awkward twist. The crack of her spine echoing through the air. Her body flew throughout the air blood splattering on the sidewalk. Her eyes rolled to the back of her head. Simon stood there as the sun blinded him watching as his first love's body flew throughout the air and a tear rolled down his cheek. Alisha's mutilated body started to descend above his head. It was as if her body had turned into a rag doll. Alisha's body finally crashed into Simon's arm dead. Simon stared at the disfigured body in front of him and couldn't help but weep, even if she did deserved it

Flashback Scene

We were scraping the chipped paint off the wall of the locker room in the community center. He didn't like the fact that I was here but how could I not. Freddie's neck still had scratches from last night. I didn't want it to happen, we had a few drinks and things just got blurry. I didn't even like him before. We were sitting at the bar of the community center. He was sitting there talking about how our probation worker was such a douche.
“He must have a tiny penis, you know? Like miniscule. That must be why he chose this job, to make others feel as shitty as him. He’s such a wanker.” He said taking a sip of his beer. I was laughing hysterically at his remark.
“Yes, I actually think he does have a small penis. I bet he could wear tights and nothing would show” I said smiling at him, and then I took a sip. For a second our eyes met.  He noticed me and he stopped talking he just smiled. I knew what it meant and so did he. We sat there staring at each other. I smiled again not knowing why I did it but it just seemed right. Then he smiled and I was sure of it.
“Do you wanna shag me?” he asked.
“I thought you were never going to ask you melon fucker” I responded. We sneaked out to the storage room of the bar making sure the bartender didn't see us. Locking the door behind we began to undress and the rest just happened. I woke up to the smell of plastic. Somehow last night we made our way to the gymnasium where we had fell asleep on some gymnastics mats. I couldn’t find my clothes and Freddie was asleep. Now we were standing here in the locker room just exchanging mortified looks wishing it hadn't happened.