Sunday, February 19, 2012

Slowing Down Time

sentence summary : Alisha was angry at herself for allowing her secret to be revealed. 


summary paragraph: Alisha ran out of her house the wind blowing in her hair, Simon yelled after her,but she payed him no mind to him. She knew she didn't deserve him, he was to good for her, she was a two timing hoe. She ran out into the oncoming traffic like a business woman,  she thought it was more important to check her phone rather than what was in front of her. The car came toward her in full speed but all she could think of was the face that Simon gave her when she spilled her secret. She thought maybe I deserve to die, he was to good for me, she was a whore. A single tear began to fall from her left eye as the realization sunk in that she cheated on him with her brother Nathan.

Slow motion/ Flashback: Alisha heard a loud honking before she felt a huge force on her hip. Her head whip-lashed and she was lifted up off the floor. Her hair danced with the wind as she slammed own into the hood of the car. Her arm dislocated under her. Her body began to shift in position. Simon stood by the door looking in fear, petrified. The body flew his way making an unnatural and awkward twist. The crack of her spine echoing through the air. Her body flew throughout the air blood splattering on the sidewalk. Her eyes rolled to the back of her head. Simon stood there as the sun blinded him watching as his first love's body flew throughout the air and a tear rolled down his cheek. Alisha's mutilated body started to descend above his head. It was as if her body had turned into a rag doll. Alisha's body finally crashed into Simon's arm dead. Simon stared at the disfigured body in front of him and couldn't help but weep, even if she did deserved it

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