Thursday, October 13, 2011
Journal #7
They stopped for a soda and they shared it as they smiled into each other's eyes. They walked past a crowed head turning to look at them, you could see mixed emotions in the crowd. They seemed so happy laughing together and smiling at each other. People stared as they walked passed the church. They reached the park and placed a blanket down, the they laid back and looked at the clouds. He then smiled and looked over to the blue eyes he loved so much and said " I love you Max."
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